Research and Planning: Adapting the script
With our original script, we realised that there were parts that needed to be changed for the sake of realism and character relatability, for example, "we're in a bit of a tizz" was changed to "well this is a bit embarrassing".
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We also changed bits such as the interaction with the barista, upon review by the teacher, to just Christopher bumping into Naomi on his way to uni, because it is very unlikely that we would have gotten permission from a barista to be in our film, and even if we did, it would have been difficult to film and disrupting for other people in the coffee shop/coffee stall. This also made the script more audience-friendly and focused on only on the essential parts of the story.
FINAL FULL SCRIPT
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